One typo stood out to me, “There's nothing sexy about Ms. Prentiss, believe me.” I'm pretty sure there are many sexy things about Ms. Prentiss. ;) I'm guessing there's a word missing and then it's a direct address.
I really liked your characterizations. (Morgan ♥ Sorry, I'm on a big of a I-love-and-miss-Morgan kick right now)
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Date: 2011-08-29 04:59 pm (UTC)One typo stood out to me, “There's nothing sexy about Ms. Prentiss, believe me.” I'm pretty sure there are many sexy things about Ms. Prentiss. ;) I'm guessing there's a word missing and then it's a direct address.
I really liked your characterizations. (Morgan ♥ Sorry, I'm on a big of a I-love-and-miss-Morgan kick right now)